Sample Answer IELTS Writing Task 1 - Diagram / Graph description
If we compare Shanghai and LA we can discover that the former is superior not only in terms of facilities but also in the overall environment. The contrast is obvious as we see the crime rate and the traffic condition in the latter. 12.4 and 30.4 respectively. The standard of the population in the Chinese financial "capital" outruns the corresponding in LA in every aspect.
The advantages of living in a city like Shanghai are apparent. It can provide a safe and peaceful atmosphere, because the crime rate and the traffic congestions are kept within limits. The citizens also enjoy a good infrastructure (especially educational) and can rely on a well-developed system of services. To sum up, if we take into consideration all the factors and the data given, Shanghai is the most attractive among the five cities.